Month: August 2019

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: When Mama Says No

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Great song for kids! I liked hearing the full band sound. Good job on the harmonica.

Constructive Comments: I have no constructive comments

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: Cryin’ Out LOUD

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Loved the arrangement and quality of the recording. Would be great in a movie or on radio. Voice suits the style of music.

Constructive Comments: I have no constructive comments

Broadjam Artist: Ante Novaselic
Song: Set Me Free

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Catchy intro. Loved all of it. Would be great on radio or in a movie.

Constructive Comments: I don’t have any constructive comments

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Walk A Mile In My Blues

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked the chord progression. It would be great in a movie.

Constructive Comments: I’d like to hear a band with it.

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: LA New Years Blues (Blues Acoustic)

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Great performance , and song, nice job

Constructive Comments: just the genre, Its really a (alt folk) song about the blues with a few bluesy riffs but its not a BLUES song, musically speaking,

Broadjam Artist: English Mike
Song: 49 Cadillac

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: great song, great performances good vocals.

Constructive Comments: My only criticism would be that the recording might be a little better, Did you master this? you might be able to get it a little fuller if you did. I think the sub genre, is maybe Honkey tonk rather than country,

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: A Dog’s Life

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: wow, Just great, good song, great PERFORMANCE, a real pro!

Constructive Comments: Great just the way it is, you’ve got some great talent. One of the best performers I’ve heard here on Broadjam so far. great voice, I wish I had YOUR VOICE,

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: Husband & Wife

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Great playing, good raunchy attitude, sounds like a bar fight coming down. vocals a re great too.

Constructive Comments: Don’t have any, its fine just like it is………..

Broadjam Artist: Mag Pie
Song: The Calm.

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Nice mood, and good playing, not a bad recording, seems fitting for background music.

Constructive Comments: My criticism, would be this, after about 1 minute I started waiting for it to go somewhere else in the arrangement, and it never did? it needs another passage. either up or down in dynamics and a key change. Its good for a minute but won’t make the cut as is unless you take it somewhere , take your listener on a journey, you can’t just sit in the same place the whole time.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: I’m That Other Guy (minute vocal)

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: great job, well made, good vocals, and nice mood

Constructive Comments: Maybe just the mix, seems a little crowded , maybe needs to have use of your panning better and spread some tracks out , don’t stereo everything and let somethings dominate little, just a bit busy and over saturated, but not bad, I’m just trying to think of ways to maybe make it better.