Month: August 2019

Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: Don’t Throw Me Away

Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick

Positive Comments: No. Everything was fine until you began singing. I’m sorry. This does not sound like you envision it in your mind. YOU MUST USE a different singer.

Constructive Comments: You can probably sing just fine. Just make sure that when you do it has some motivation. That was absolutely terrible. What you have to do is listen to your take right after you do it. Then improve it a little each time until you are getting closer and closer to what you are intending. I don’t know what went wrong, but you should never leave things like that. Just improve it. OR else do not release it for anyone to hear. No one wants to critique your voice. Maybe if you had a woman sing that it would be nice. I am so sorry if this hurts your feelings. Like I said, I am sure you can probably sing, but this is not a good time.

Broadjam Artist: larry costa
Song: A time for you and me

Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick

Positive Comments: Take the lyrics out they are terrible. You can sing fine just not right for this tune. At all!

Constructive Comments: Take out the lyrics everything else is wonderful. No lyrics necessary here…

Broadjam Artist: Mag Pie
Song: I Wanna Be Your 1-10

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Entertaining piece with a very good and steady beat and very interesting changes throughout. Nice arrangement.

Constructive Comments: Very cool piece.

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: (pgo) Hurts So Hard PGOlach

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: This is SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOD!! The song creates emotion in a wonderful way! The vocal is fantastic……not technically perfect but so moving! I like the simple arrangement. The guitar that is strummed somewhat aggressively matches perfectly with the desperation of the vocals.

Constructive Comments: GREAT STUFF!! Congrats!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Rosa Danced In Veracruz NEW TRUMPET SOUND

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Hi Art! Me again!! Really nice tune…..has such an ambiance and sweet intimacy to it! I think that is you on vocals? I wouldn’t call you a singer (or me for that matter) but you have the ability to deliver a song…..lots of feeling in this one….reminds me of Jimmy Buffett (one of my faves).

Constructive Comments: Great job my friend!! I LOVE IT!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Ante Novaselic
Song: Walk in the Park

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Great sounding track!! It is immediately catchy and hummable! The production/musicianship sounds tight at can be. Love the harmonics! Great mix!!

Constructive Comments: I wanted it to be longer! Great stuff!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Oskar Christian
Song: Zambra en Vallarta – 2006 – oskar christian

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: Unique song. Nice instrumentation choices. It reminds me of a horse and rider limping through narrow streets after a bullfight and the streets happen to be icy. (But I do not believe bullfights are fought in winter climates.)

Constructive Comments: Each guitar lick seems to (ever so slightly) follow the beginning of the beat. (coming late). Perhaps this is intentional, but it suggests a sluggishness on the part of the guitar in comparison to the percussion. Maybe this is meant to sound like a ripple effect.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Look At My Heart

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really pleasant tune with good arrangement and pleasing vocals and backing vocals. Smoothly flowing piece and a catchy tune.

Constructive Comments: Nice song.

Broadjam Artist: Earkandi
Song: The Light

Reviewer: The Trouts

Positive Comments: Great song. Very well produced. Excellent vocal performance and musicians. Sounds very professional.

Constructive Comments: Keep it up!

Broadjam Artist: N.Jones, Protilius Productions
Song: Yasmin & Madison’s Theme (2016 Solo)

Reviewer: Nigel Barrett

Positive Comments: Makes a change to hear something on here in this genre. Lovely piano tone. At first I thought it was going to be very midi/clinical but I liked the soft and loud parts and variation.

Constructive Comments: Low score from me for recording as it appears badly distorted.