Month: July 2019

Broadjam Artist: Oskar Christian
Song: wilderness and fishes arround

Reviewer: Ladee V

Positive Comments: Practice makes perfect. Keep loving what you do and master it.

Constructive Comments: I hope you take my review as just one person’s opinion and know that it’s constructive. There was a lot going instrumentally that made the song sound somewhat confusing. The intro was very long, the vocals were low. I didn’t know if it was supposed to be a full song or an instrumental. The song/track itself was way too long (by at least by 2+ min or so). You don’t have to make this review public.

Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: There but for the grace of god

Reviewer: HAWC

Positive Comments: The chords and instrumentation all have a lot of potential, the message seemed to be very inspirational as well. The execution has a laid back cool kinda of vibe that matches the feeling of peace I think the song is conveying.

Constructive Comments: The vocals aren’t the strong part of this recording, but certainly not horrible either. I’d love to be able to make out what the hook is saying. Maybe the lyrics could use a small enhancement or slight revision to just be sure the listener is hearing or understanding all of the message to it’s fullest potential.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: I Really Want You Tonight

Reviewer: Ladee V

Positive Comments: Nice instrumentation, nice arrangement, the hook was simple but catchy. I really enjoyed listening. Definitely gave off that old time country vibe. Good job with this one.

Constructive Comments: Nothing here. The song was great.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Nothin’ I can do about the Wrinkles

Reviewer: HAWC

Positive Comments: Musicianship here is classic! You don’t hear music like this very often anymore unless in a musical on stage or movie. Very entertaining. Vocal execution has some moments where notes get a pinch or hair off, but overall harmonies and execution is great! Has a very raw human quality you don’t hear often anymore with technology corrections. This feels like “REAL” music that doesn’t get appreciated anymore like it deserves! Thank you for sharing!

Constructive Comments: If I add any constructive criticism, it would be to just make sure vocals stay tight …but you didn’t leave much room for any criticism. Again this is classic good music with that human quality for the ages!

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: Down To The Bone (w/ Dianne MacAdam)

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: WHAT A WONDERFUL CONCEPT FOR A SONG!!! This is one of the best songs I’ve ever heard that is not already cut by a major artist! The melody on the opening piano immediately grabbed me! I was really hoping it would be the refrain……and it was! This is just beautiful! Vocal is wonderful/passionate!

Constructive Comments: I think the only thing I would consider is adding strings to the arrangement. This emotional, melodic song just begs for some strings! As it is, it is a total home run….strings could make it a grand slam! Congrats!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Banjo Ebow Minute

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: This is really pretty!! The melody is nice, and the instrumentation is well selected and played. I really enjoyed listening!

Constructive Comments: I think it needs to be expanded. When you’re enjoying the ride, you don’t want it to stop. I would continue with the theme, expanding the instrumentation, then have a different part, and come back to the first theme later. I think you’re onto something really good here! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: reap what you sew

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Really beautiful instrumental!! Tons of emotion in the tune. Playing is wonderful……love the interaction of the guitar and harmonica! The recording and mix sound excellent to me. Really well done in every way!!

Constructive Comments: I would not change a thing. Just the way it should be! Congrats!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Ashley Martin
Song: The Love We Never Made

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: There are some wonderful concepts and images in the lyric!! The vocal is quite strong in most parts but has a few times where it is a bit pitchy. I think a simple arrangement works quite well. There is a LOT here to like!!

Constructive Comments: I think the arrangement could be filled out a little and still be quite sparse. The reverb is really heavy on the vocal…..I love reverb but it is probably a bit too much. I use a program called Band in a Box by PG music in which you can create great arrangements without playing the instrument yourself….great way to get great arrangements. Enjoyed your song!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: Hurricane

Reviewer: HAWC

Positive Comments: I love the lyrics, musicianship and recording….all of it was on point 100%. Loved it, seriously..not just one of those blow by reviews just to make numbers. I thoroughly listened and enjoyed it.

Constructive Comments: At first I wasn’t sure about the lead vocal tone, the quality and pitch and skill was there, just has a lil more smoky feel I would expect from a jazz ballad, but thats commercial marketing I’m use to. This is clearly an original with a classic voice! Still job well done. I could almost hear Elvis doin this song! Definitely radio worthy!

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: Blue Mandolin

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Really cool song Greg!! Very well written, extremely creative, and very well delivered! Vocal and mix/arrangement are perfect for the subject matter. Great job!!

Constructive Comments: I don’t think there’s anything I would change…..works perfectly just as it is! Congrats!! Take care. Greg