Month: March 2019

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: The Moonlight

Reviewer: Marc S. Pate

Positive Comments: Tasty, nice harmonies! Really like the chorus, lyrics and all, bridge is a nice contrast.

Constructive Comments: Cool tune. I used to play with a very sage old B3 player, who’d really been around, and his philosophy was always, the lower the lows the higher the highs, so he would always insist on varying the intensity of the song. Just a thought. Well done.

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: the Deadly Game

Reviewer: Marc S. Pate

Positive Comments: Showing my age here, but your vocal reminds me a little of Ian Anderson. Nice guitar player.

Constructive Comments: Everyone’s a critic, right! But, the segue from acoustic to heavy electric is a little abrupt. That being said, I’d bring the electric out a little stronger in the mix. Guitar player is really good but, you might want to build more of theme on the solo. But nicely done.

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: the Story of a Woman and a Man

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked the harmonica and tone of your voice suits the song.

Constructive Comments: I found the voice a little too far back in the mix.

Broadjam Artist: Barry Osbourn
Song: Have Mercy (intrumental)

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Instruments are played very good. I liked the beat and the guitar a lot.

Constructive Comments: I would hear this song in a movie or commercial or easy listening music radio.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Chain of Sin Anthony’s Version

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked the lyrics and arrangement.

Constructive Comments: I would not fade out before the next vs or ch. a transition would be great. Overall a good song could see it in a movie.

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Take Me (duet)

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Great up beat, loved the vocals, very nice arrangement. I would listen to this on the radio

Constructive Comments: I don’t have any critique for this song.

Broadjam Artist: Mike Halls
Song: In My Life

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: A very nice rendition of the song. The recording was done well and all instruments were played very well.

Constructive Comments: Where the Beatles had the in-between music- I would have played it a bit louder like they did. Great song for background music , it has potential for sure.

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: 56 Still Upright Album: 13. Broken Dream Confessor

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked your lyrics and the acoustic guitar sounds really good.

Constructive Comments: The song melodically is somewhat common but a good melody.

Broadjam Artist: Auralov
Song: As Much

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked the melody of the song.

Constructive Comments: The lead guitar sounded a bit funny. Like there’s a scratchiness with it.

Broadjam Artist: Till
Song: I Shiver

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked the arrangement and the tone of your voice. I could see this song on the radio too.

Constructive Comments: I found the lead vocal at times too far in the mix. I would either bring it up a tiny bit or lightly compress it. The horns were pretty loud could bring them down a bit which might solve it.