Month: March 2019

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: My Journey Home

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nice classical feeling to this. Great blending of keys and strings. Refreshingly original sound.

Constructive Comments: Great job. This sounds like it is custom-made for a TV show or commercial.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: I’m So Lonely

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Interesting idea ” I’m so lonely when your around “, moody and introspective. Definitely creates a mental image of some guy sitting in a smoke filled bar full of people but completely alone.

Constructive Comments: I think you have the basis for a really good song but overall the arrangement and recording need some attention. For example, I’d consider making it a little more of a traditional blues form, rather than two chords repeated which change after about a minute twenty for no apparent reason . The two sections don’t sound integral to one another, so maybe either an actual 12 or 16 bar form, or an actual chorus. Just sounds incomplete. For that matter, it could simply repeat tow chords the whole song, but change dynamic with instrumentation, melody . and rhythm.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: But If You Should Change Your Mind / R&B

Reviewer: G. Twilight

Positive Comments: The right singer over this could make it a pop hit.

Constructive Comments: better mixing of song for clarity.. the guitar was drowning out the drums.. i could barely hear them.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Turn It Over

Reviewer: G. Twilight

Positive Comments: Very upbeat and energetic.. you can definitely dance to it.

Constructive Comments: a better mic for clearer vocal and less reverb. better mixing and mastering too.

Broadjam Artist: Sasweetie Music
Song: Down Home

Reviewer: G. Twilight

Positive Comments: The organ was the best.

Constructive Comments: Though the genre was not available to select from, I would suggest this be a contemporary/pop gospel song. It has a real churchy feel to it.

Broadjam Artist: Nick Flores
Song: Hypnotized (acoustic version)

Reviewer: G. Twilight

Positive Comments: The chorus and overall theme of this song was great and easy to remember.

Constructive Comments: I would suggest a better mic and more precise mastering for vocal clarity.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Angel (Selsky/Dunkle)

Reviewer: The Pursuit from the Original Wilson Mower Pursuit Detroit

Positive Comments: I like the guitar licks and the overall chord progression

Constructive Comments: Nothing to add, it all sounds good.

Broadjam Artist: Wayne Ammons
Song: Hollywood Dreaming

Reviewer: The Pursuit from the Original Wilson Mower Pursuit Detroit

Positive Comments: Nice instrumentation, vocal pitch is good, decent hook

Constructive Comments: Vocal intonation sounded slightly off at times. You might want to run it through Melodyne.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: The Pursuit from the Original Wilson Mower Pursuit Detroit

Positive Comments: I like everything about this song, original idea and lyrics, great instrumentation.

Constructive Comments: I think the vocal could use just a touch of reverb or flanging.

Broadjam Artist: Lonnie G
Song: I Can’t Help Myself

Reviewer: Zorealzs

Positive Comments: Great Song

Constructive Comments: Awesome feel