Month: March 2019

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Word On The Street / Blues Rock

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: there some good things going on…

Constructive Comments: jsut need to organize the sections if you want it to sound cohesive..

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: Hafabuck

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: POWERFUL, HEAVY, ASS KICKIN”

Constructive Comments: nothing here…just cool.

Broadjam Artist: Barry Osbourn
Song: Satisfy

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: Killer…dig everything here

Constructive Comments: wow…would love to put lyrics and Vocals to this…let me know if you’re interested…

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: I Don’t Know

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Hey, you have a great singing voice, lots of potential and your recording quality is pretty good BUT….

Constructive Comments: You could improve this song in a few ways, The lyrics need a little more substance, and the arrangement needs some work, your whole intro verse is great but theres no pay off at the end, the chorus just kinda falls flat, its not really there, You should almost always pick up the intensity when you get to the chorus, and that other beat you tried to throw in doesn’t work, sorry, just keep the same beat but add some big distorted guitars to the chorus and double your voice up, put a few drop outs, like a quick break right before the chorus and then just come in with the same beat but bigger sound. Hope this helps, you have a great voice, so theres potential here, just work on your song craft a little more. Good work!

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: Desert Breeze

Reviewer: Mike Halls

Positive Comments: Needs vocals to make a song out of it,the instrumentation is good.

Constructive Comments: Nicely played but come up with a voal line and lyrics and it will shine. Good job

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Nocturno

Reviewer: Mike Halls

Positive Comments: Great melodic piece,works very well. Nice instrumentation and played very well. I do love to hear melody.

Constructive Comments: Good job my friend its great as is.

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: Apocalypse

Reviewer: Mike Halls

Positive Comments: Liked the orchestral beginning more than when the rock thing came in. Nothing wrong with mixing the two together though. I did like the way that the first part evolved and would have liked to have heard more. Sounded like two different songs joined together.

Constructive Comments: I cant fault anything it was all done very well,good job.

Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: That AIN’T Right

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: nice chording and solidly heavy riffs…solid vocals as well..quirkya really fine Hard Blues/Rock tuneecellent triolove the wah wah…well recorded and a fine mix, too.

Constructive Comments: what can i say…I DIG IT!!

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: A Slap on the Wrist /Blues Rock

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: i can hear this for some film work

Constructive Comments: you slipped out of time with the drums just for a bit..an easy thing to do..potential here..good luck

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Old Man

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Very nice laid back song. I would categorize it under jazz instead. The mix is awesome too.

Constructive Comments: Musicianship is very good. Would go well in a movie or under easy listening radio.