Month: October 2018

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Going To Church

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

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Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Going To Church

Reviewer: Delta Burnett Reed

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Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Come On My Side / Rock & Roll

Reviewer: Matt Mereu

Positive Comments: A pretty little instrumental. I see lyrics, but no vocals, so I assume it’s a work in progress. There are components to the song that really catch my ear. The piano melody is quite nice. The delayed guitar statement that comes in on it’s own at :14-:21 and other places is quite nice too.

Constructive Comments: I think the mix could use some work. The drums are quite low and the piano quite high. The performances could be tightened up in places, especially the piano.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Come On My Side / Rock & Roll

Reviewer: Matt Mereu

Positive Comments: A pretty little instrumental. I see lyrics, but no vocals, so I assume it’s a work in progress. There are components to the song that really catch my ear. The piano melody is quite nice. The delayed guitar statement that comes in on it’s own at :14-:21 and other places is quite nice too.

Constructive Comments: I think the mix could use some work. The drums are quite low and the piano quite high. The performances could be tightened up in places, especially the piano.

Broadjam Artist: Tommy Stewart
Song: Animal

Reviewer: Matt Mereu

Positive Comments: I like the feel of this tune. It has an inviting groove. Nice strong vocal delivered for the most part with the right amount of intensity. I really like the intro to the song. It really sets the mood right from the top. I really like the lyrics for the most part. Everything is well played for the most part. Nice bottom end.

Constructive Comments: There are a couple glitches in the recording of the song. For example, at 1:07 the word “hand” is distorted. I’m sure you’re aware of it. It’s minor but it does distract. From an arrangement perspective, I might consider varying the dynamics and instrument a little bit. Instead of having the that nicely played Les Paul (?) noodle throughout the tune, I might consider dropping things out a bringing them back in at appropriate times. The chorus could hit a lot harder that way. Nicely done overall.

Broadjam Artist: Tommy Stewart
Song: Animal

Reviewer: Matt Mereu

Positive Comments: I like the feel of this tune. It has an inviting groove. Nice strong vocal delivered for the most part with the right amount of intensity. I really like the intro to the song. It really sets the mood right from the top. I really like the lyrics for the most part. Everything is well played for the most part. Nice bottom end.

Constructive Comments: There are a couple glitches in the recording of the song. For example, at 1:07 the word “hand” is distorted. I’m sure you’re aware of it. It’s minor but it does distract. From an arrangement perspective, I might consider varying the dynamics and instrument a little bit. Instead of having the that nicely played Les Paul (?) noodle throughout the tune, I might consider dropping things out a bringing them back in at appropriate times. The chorus could hit a lot harder that way. Nicely done overall.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Going To Church

Reviewer: Trinity

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Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Going To Church

Reviewer: Trinity

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Broadjam Artist: Chris Mason
Song: Life’s Mystery

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very well written piece with a real nice build-up. Lyrically and musically stimulating.

Constructive Comments: Nice work.

Broadjam Artist: Chris Mason
Song: Life’s Mystery

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very well written piece with a real nice build-up. Lyrically and musically stimulating.

Constructive Comments: Nice work.