Month: August 2018

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: Paige Stroman

Positive Comments: Good lyrics really capture that the singer is questioning life.

Constructive Comments: The recording could be a little better. Watch for too much of a nasal sound to voice.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: Paige Stroman

Positive Comments: Good lyrics really capture that the singer is questioning life.

Constructive Comments: The recording could be a little better. Watch for too much of a nasal sound to voice.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Close Your Eyes

Reviewer: Paige Stroman

Positive Comments: Beautiful imagery. The instrumentation was perfect for the song.

Constructive Comments: The vocals were a bit pitchy. Clean that up for an even better song. Some rhymes seemed a bit forced.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Close Your Eyes

Reviewer: Paige Stroman

Positive Comments: Beautiful imagery. The instrumentation was perfect for the song.

Constructive Comments: The vocals were a bit pitchy. Clean that up for an even better song. Some rhymes seemed a bit forced.

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Paint the canvas

Reviewer: Massa

Positive Comments: voc is cool and tells a good story, kin of vox that sounds original, though struggled with the pitch in the higher partdgood story

Constructive Comments: I think with abit of that fat nashville tracking this could be a movie track, it’s interesting. worth spending a few more dollars on and getting a few extra tracks going, good luck

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Paint the canvas

Reviewer: Massa

Positive Comments: voc is cool and tells a good story, kin of vox that sounds original, though struggled with the pitch in the higher partdgood story

Constructive Comments: I think with abit of that fat nashville tracking this could be a movie track, it’s interesting. worth spending a few more dollars on and getting a few extra tracks going, good luck

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Alone On Valentines Day Again (Pop-Adult Contemporary, Folk)

Reviewer: Massa

Positive Comments: nice vox straight offac guitar is cool, nice tonesinger songwriter, can see him singing this in coffee shop or perhaps even in a movie

Constructive Comments: perhaps a little more lift in the chlots of emotion in the vox delivery, very belieable, but the hook just needed a little more to be memorablegood idea

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Sunday Drives

Reviewer: Massa

Positive Comments: nice picking on the intro, was hoping for some moreslide is cool, nice tonelots of passion and belief in the vox delivery

Constructive Comments: little more control on the vox neeed, gets a little pitchy, and some of the lyrics are not audible

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Sunday Drives

Reviewer: Massa

Positive Comments: nice picking on the intro, was hoping for some moreslide is cool, nice tonelots of passion and belief in the vox delivery

Constructive Comments: little more control on the vox neeed, gets a little pitchy, and some of the lyrics are not audible

Broadjam Artist: Bobby Caputo
Song: 2 Timin’ in 3/4 Time

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Very cool sounding song, and very funny – I love the way the song breaks from 4/4 into a 3/4 waltz, that is so cool. Very good lyrics and cool hook.

Constructive Comments: I really like this one, the only thing I wouldn’t do is right at the end the song goes back to 3/4 time – I would stay in 4/4 time at the end – other than that great song!