MINDWORKS OF M.T.S by Mark Tha Shark

Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha SharkSong: MINDWORKS OF M.T.SReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: This is like Motley Crue ’83 or maybe Dokken.Constructive Comments: Did you life this from an old cassette? Sounds like there’s so much loss in the sound. …

Mark Tha Shark

Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha Shark
Song: MINDWORKS OF M.T.S

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This is like Motley Crue ’83 or maybe Dokken.

Constructive Comments: Did you life this from an old cassette? Sounds like there’s so much loss in the sound. This is dated but you love it! Gotta get decent sound. And vocals!!!

In The City by Signal 30

Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: In The City

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Signal 30 with an attitude as usual!! Nice staging of the parts with the high hat & shake coming in on verse two. The dirty & heavy key sequence bass gives an urgent feel throughout. I like the whiskey voice vocals.

Constructive Comments: Too much delay tail on the vocals–it doesn’t add much and detracts more. Maybe just a slapback hint that doesn’t have too much murky low end. If you’re going for techno drums make the bass fatter with a synth double sine wave (plenty of tutorials out there).

Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: In The City

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Signal 30 with an attitude as usual!! Nice staging of the parts with the high hat & shake coming in on verse two. The dirty & heavy key sequence bass gives an urgent feel throughout. I like the whiskey voice vocals.

Constructive Comments: Too much delay tail on the vocals–it doesn’t add much and detracts more. Maybe just a slapback hint that doesn’t have too much murky low end. If you’re going for techno drums make the bass fatter with a synth double sine wave (plenty of tutorials out there).

The Remedy by Just Jordan

Just Jordan

Broadjam Artist: Just Jordan
Song: The Remedy

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of this Genre, but this is In your Face excellent!!! Great Rhythm R&B and Rap…. what is sreally neat is that I can understand every lyric that has been penned by this artist!!! Extremely personal and gut wrenching heart felt lyrics…sung with total immersion into the music!! This is a Truly Great song, sung by a Truly Great Artist!!!!!!!!!

Constructive Comments: Check the very beginning intro, it’s starting at almost 0:00/01, just trying to be helpful…………

Just Jordan

Broadjam Artist: Just Jordan
Song: The Remedy

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of this Genre, but this is In your Face excellent!!! Great Rhythm R&B and Rap…. what is sreally neat is that I can understand every lyric that has been penned by this artist!!! Extremely personal and gut wrenching heart felt lyrics…sung with total immersion into the music!! This is a Truly Great song, sung by a Truly Great Artist!!!!!!!!!

Constructive Comments: Check the very beginning intro, it’s starting at almost 0:00/01, just trying to be helpful…………

The Remedy by Just Jordan

Just Jordan

Broadjam Artist: Just Jordan
Song: The Remedy

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of this Genre, but this is In your Face excellent!!! Great Rhythm R&B and Rap…. what is sreally neat is that I can understand every lyric that has been penned by this artist!!! Extremely personal and gut wrenching heart felt lyrics…sung with total immersion into the music!! This is a Truly Great song, sung by a Truly Great Artist!!!!!!!!!

Constructive Comments: Check the very beginning intro, it’s starting at almost 0:00/01, just trying to be helpful…………

Just Jordan

Broadjam Artist: Just Jordan
Song: The Remedy

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of this Genre, but this is In your Face excellent!!! Great Rhythm R&B and Rap…. what is sreally neat is that I can understand every lyric that has been penned by this artist!!! Extremely personal and gut wrenching heart felt lyrics…sung with total immersion into the music!! This is a Truly Great song, sung by a Truly Great Artist!!!!!!!!!

Constructive Comments: Check the very beginning intro, it’s starting at almost 0:00/01, just trying to be helpful…………

Jeanie by Randal Dunkle

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: The melody on the piano is really beautiful!! It’s a pleasant love tune. It has a British Invasion sound from the 60’s, which is a huge favorite of mine!! There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! I think with a better mix this would be quite an excellent composition!!! Good job!!

Constructive Comments: There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! Just some fine tuning and this will sound cool!!! Good Job!!!

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: The melody on the piano is really beautiful!! It’s a pleasant love tune. It has a British Invasion sound from the 60’s, which is a huge favorite of mine!! There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! I think with a better mix this would be quite an excellent composition!!! Good job!!

Constructive Comments: There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! Just some fine tuning and this will sound cool!!! Good Job!!!

Jeanie by Randal Dunkle

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: The melody on the piano is really beautiful!! It’s a pleasant love tune. It has a British Invasion sound from the 60’s, which is a huge favorite of mine!! There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! I think with a better mix this would be quite an excellent composition!!! Good job!!

Constructive Comments: There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! Just some fine tuning and this will sound cool!!! Good Job!!!

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: The melody on the piano is really beautiful!! It’s a pleasant love tune. It has a British Invasion sound from the 60’s, which is a huge favorite of mine!! There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! I think with a better mix this would be quite an excellent composition!!! Good job!!

Constructive Comments: There are several places where the music is a tad bassy and needs to be mixed differently! Just some fine tuning and this will sound cool!!! Good Job!!!

On the Border by Jeff Roberts

Jeff Roberts

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: On the Border

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am starting to know this Artist so well, that I can tell by the sound of his Guitar……who it is!!! I have heard this wonderful composition already, it may be one of his Best Songs to-Date!! Both the guitar and the vocal sounds like Steven Stills! You know, the rest of us Broad Jam members might as well just quit, this is just flat out unfair, that we have to compete with Jeff Roberts!! Thank’s for nothing Jeff!!

Constructive Comments: Nothing wrong here……….JUST GREAT SONGWRITING!!! Hats off to you Jeff!!

Jeff Roberts

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: On the Border

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am starting to know this Artist so well, that I can tell by the sound of his Guitar……who it is!!! I have heard this wonderful composition already, it may be one of his Best Songs to-Date!! Both the guitar and the vocal sounds like Steven Stills! You know, the rest of us Broad Jam members might as well just quit, this is just flat out unfair, that we have to compete with Jeff Roberts!! Thank’s for nothing Jeff!!

Constructive Comments: Nothing wrong here……….JUST GREAT SONGWRITING!!! Hats off to you Jeff!!

On the Border by Jeff Roberts

Jeff Roberts

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: On the Border

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am starting to know this Artist so well, that I can tell by the sound of his Guitar……who it is!!! I have heard this wonderful composition already, it may be one of his Best Songs to-Date!! Both the guitar and the vocal sounds like Steven Stills! You know, the rest of us Broad Jam members might as well just quit, this is just flat out unfair, that we have to compete with Jeff Roberts!! Thank’s for nothing Jeff!!

Constructive Comments: Nothing wrong here……….JUST GREAT SONGWRITING!!! Hats off to you Jeff!!

Jeff Roberts

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: On the Border

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: I am starting to know this Artist so well, that I can tell by the sound of his Guitar……who it is!!! I have heard this wonderful composition already, it may be one of his Best Songs to-Date!! Both the guitar and the vocal sounds like Steven Stills! You know, the rest of us Broad Jam members might as well just quit, this is just flat out unfair, that we have to compete with Jeff Roberts!! Thank’s for nothing Jeff!!

Constructive Comments: Nothing wrong here……….JUST GREAT SONGWRITING!!! Hats off to you Jeff!!

The Blue (Solo) by Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet NicholsSong: The Blue (Solo)Reviewer: Steve Dafoe – SongwriterPositive Comments: Very nice New Age piece! Good guitar work. Well balanced production. Nice to hear the lyrics! Professional piece! Constructive Comments: nothing from…

Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: The Blue (Solo)

Reviewer: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Positive Comments: Very nice New Age piece! Good guitar work. Well balanced production. Nice to hear the lyrics! Professional piece!

Constructive Comments: nothing from me……………………………………………………….

The Blue (Solo) by Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet NicholsSong: The Blue (Solo)Reviewer: Steve Dafoe – SongwriterPositive Comments: Very nice New Age piece! Good guitar work. Well balanced production. Nice to hear the lyrics! Professional piece! Constructive Comments: nothing from…

Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: The Blue (Solo)

Reviewer: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Positive Comments: Very nice New Age piece! Good guitar work. Well balanced production. Nice to hear the lyrics! Professional piece!

Constructive Comments: nothing from me……………………………………………………….