Cola Nuts by Jeff Maguire

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Cola Nuts

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Wowza…….people say our music is a bit confusing….this is really pushing the musical envelope…..pretty trippy!! I’m sure that this is all intentional and that this is exactly what the composer wanted in this arrangement. This has a Frank Zappa feel, which calls for the listener to be incredibly open minded!! My hats off to the composer………….very original!!! This composition could be used in a film!!!

Constructive Comments: I believed that I have Jacked my Jaws enough!!! I have made my observations………..

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Cola Nuts

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Wowza…….people say our music is a bit confusing….this is really pushing the musical envelope…..pretty trippy!! I’m sure that this is all intentional and that this is exactly what the composer wanted in this arrangement. This has a Frank Zappa feel, which calls for the listener to be incredibly open minded!! My hats off to the composer………….very original!!! This composition could be used in a film!!!

Constructive Comments: I believed that I have Jacked my Jaws enough!!! I have made my observations………..

Cola Nuts by Jeff Maguire

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Cola Nuts

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Wowza…….people say our music is a bit confusing….this is really pushing the musical envelope…..pretty trippy!! I’m sure that this is all intentional and that this is exactly what the composer wanted in this arrangement. This has a Frank Zappa feel, which calls for the listener to be incredibly open minded!! My hats off to the composer………….very original!!! This composition could be used in a film!!!

Constructive Comments: I believed that I have Jacked my Jaws enough!!! I have made my observations………..

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Cola Nuts

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Wowza…….people say our music is a bit confusing….this is really pushing the musical envelope…..pretty trippy!! I’m sure that this is all intentional and that this is exactly what the composer wanted in this arrangement. This has a Frank Zappa feel, which calls for the listener to be incredibly open minded!! My hats off to the composer………….very original!!! This composition could be used in a film!!!

Constructive Comments: I believed that I have Jacked my Jaws enough!!! I have made my observations………..

Manners Rap by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Manners RapReviewer: MARK NEWMANPositive Comments: Sounds good for a commercial that’s targeting youth. Quality isn’t bad, and vocals are nice and clear! I think it will do well at a live performance.Constructive C…

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Manners Rap

Reviewer: MARK NEWMAN

Positive Comments: Sounds good for a commercial that’s targeting youth. Quality isn’t bad, and vocals are nice and clear! I think it will do well at a live performance.

Constructive Comments: Sounds outdated for today rap music. Hook could use a better arrangement. Rap flow sounds to generic as if the rapper was talking.

Manners Rap by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Manners RapReviewer: MARK NEWMANPositive Comments: Sounds good for a commercial that’s targeting youth. Quality isn’t bad, and vocals are nice and clear! I think it will do well at a live performance.Constructive C…

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Manners Rap

Reviewer: MARK NEWMAN

Positive Comments: Sounds good for a commercial that’s targeting youth. Quality isn’t bad, and vocals are nice and clear! I think it will do well at a live performance.

Constructive Comments: Sounds outdated for today rap music. Hook could use a better arrangement. Rap flow sounds to generic as if the rapper was talking.

Stuntman by David dizzyd1440 Magee

Broadjam Artist: David dizzyd1440 MageeSong: StuntmanReviewer: MARK NEWMANPositive Comments: Nice beat, and quality of sound is good.Constructive Comments: Needs more meat on the bone. I didn’t really hear a hook to write to, however, It could be a tr…

David dizzyd1440 Magee

Broadjam Artist: David dizzyd1440 Magee
Song: Stuntman

Reviewer: MARK NEWMAN

Positive Comments: Nice beat, and quality of sound is good.

Constructive Comments: Needs more meat on the bone. I didn’t really hear a hook to write to, however, It could be a track with a straight rap flow and no break. It sounds to similar to all the other tracks that uses subbase and trap style drums.

Stuntman by David dizzyd1440 Magee

Broadjam Artist: David dizzyd1440 MageeSong: StuntmanReviewer: MARK NEWMANPositive Comments: Nice beat, and quality of sound is good.Constructive Comments: Needs more meat on the bone. I didn’t really hear a hook to write to, however, It could be a tr…

David dizzyd1440 Magee

Broadjam Artist: David dizzyd1440 Magee
Song: Stuntman

Reviewer: MARK NEWMAN

Positive Comments: Nice beat, and quality of sound is good.

Constructive Comments: Needs more meat on the bone. I didn’t really hear a hook to write to, however, It could be a track with a straight rap flow and no break. It sounds to similar to all the other tracks that uses subbase and trap style drums.

Afta Tha Age by ZLEA Traxx

Broadjam Artist: ZLEA TraxxSong: Afta Tha AgeReviewer: MARK NEWMANPositive Comments: The hook part of the instrumental is very catchy! Quality is good also. Should be a easy song to write to.Constructive Comments: Would love to hear lyrics to this son…

ZLEA Traxx

Broadjam Artist: ZLEA Traxx
Song: Afta Tha Age

Reviewer: MARK NEWMAN

Positive Comments: The hook part of the instrumental is very catchy! Quality is good also. Should be a easy song to write to.

Constructive Comments: Would love to hear lyrics to this song. Could use a few more instruments to bring it out more.

Afta Tha Age by ZLEA Traxx

Broadjam Artist: ZLEA TraxxSong: Afta Tha AgeReviewer: MARK NEWMANPositive Comments: The hook part of the instrumental is very catchy! Quality is good also. Should be a easy song to write to.Constructive Comments: Would love to hear lyrics to this son…

ZLEA Traxx

Broadjam Artist: ZLEA Traxx
Song: Afta Tha Age

Reviewer: MARK NEWMAN

Positive Comments: The hook part of the instrumental is very catchy! Quality is good also. Should be a easy song to write to.

Constructive Comments: Would love to hear lyrics to this song. Could use a few more instruments to bring it out more.

Love and Rage by Sonic

Sonic

Broadjam Artist: Sonic
Song: Love and Rage

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This sounds like a missing Styx song. Nice piano work and a good vocal timbre. It’s a passionate performance. There are some strong arrangement/instrumental components–strings, cool rhythm track and backing vocals.

Constructive Comments: You’ve got some flat notes in the vocals–you gotta listen close and go back & correct this. There’s a lot of wasted space with whoa oh’s–a bit is good but this went a long time. I think this sort of singing style is passe–it’s very strident and has a strained feeling. What about trying to make it an easier sound and stay within your effective vocal range?

Sonic

Broadjam Artist: Sonic
Song: Love and Rage

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This sounds like a missing Styx song. Nice piano work and a good vocal timbre. It’s a passionate performance. There are some strong arrangement/instrumental components–strings, cool rhythm track and backing vocals.

Constructive Comments: You’ve got some flat notes in the vocals–you gotta listen close and go back & correct this. There’s a lot of wasted space with whoa oh’s–a bit is good but this went a long time. I think this sort of singing style is passe–it’s very strident and has a strained feeling. What about trying to make it an easier sound and stay within your effective vocal range?

Love and Rage by Sonic

Sonic

Broadjam Artist: Sonic
Song: Love and Rage

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This sounds like a missing Styx song. Nice piano work and a good vocal timbre. It’s a passionate performance. There are some strong arrangement/instrumental components–strings, cool rhythm track and backing vocals.

Constructive Comments: You’ve got some flat notes in the vocals–you gotta listen close and go back & correct this. There’s a lot of wasted space with whoa oh’s–a bit is good but this went a long time. I think this sort of singing style is passe–it’s very strident and has a strained feeling. What about trying to make it an easier sound and stay within your effective vocal range?

Sonic

Broadjam Artist: Sonic
Song: Love and Rage

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This sounds like a missing Styx song. Nice piano work and a good vocal timbre. It’s a passionate performance. There are some strong arrangement/instrumental components–strings, cool rhythm track and backing vocals.

Constructive Comments: You’ve got some flat notes in the vocals–you gotta listen close and go back & correct this. There’s a lot of wasted space with whoa oh’s–a bit is good but this went a long time. I think this sort of singing style is passe–it’s very strident and has a strained feeling. What about trying to make it an easier sound and stay within your effective vocal range?