Month: February 2018

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Take Me There

Reviewer: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)

Positive Comments: Very upbeat and right to the theme. Could be a theme song or video game music. good conversation with the melody elements. I really like the B section, the rhythm is very cool. Nice huge synths fill out the sound. A lot of melody packed into this highly marketable song. Catchy ending which is crucial in the jingle industry.

Constructive Comments: Maybe a little heavy with synthesizers if there is such a thing. Felt the song could have come back to the main theme but it definitely worked with this arrangement. Maybe the only thing that would extend it if you wanted to was to add a solo or a half time break but no, I dig it the way it is… get in and get out and hit them hard with the hooks.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: I Heard You Fell In Love

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very well put-together song. I love the way you’ve constructed the chorus, with great harmony. It is quite unique. Very nice flow to this song and it keeps you humming and singing it long after it’s over.

Constructive Comments: Really good job.

Broadjam Artist: Randy Steward
Song: Uptown, Downtown

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nice feel-good song. Nice instrumental, great vocals. Kind of like Jimmy Buffet meets Elton & Kiki Dee. Just a very pleasant piece. Good job.

Constructive Comments: Best of luck.

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: River Of Pain (Country – Contemporary/Pop, Country – Classic)

Reviewer: Randy Steward

Positive Comments: I thought I was listening to America. It has that feel sound wise and flow. Nice addition of the major 7ths. A very relaxing, easy listening tune. Nice job.

Constructive Comments: It felt like the verses were longer than was comfortable. A little more variation at some point might brighten it up. Though I am critiquing your song it reminds me of a few of mine. I’ll go listen to your tunes.

Broadjam Artist: MineHead
Song: timeless weirdness

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good production, good choice of sounds. Diversity in sounds, rhythm, tempos and attitude. I like that. I enjoyed listening to it. good work.

Constructive Comments: good as it is

Broadjam Artist: Aremi Legard
Song: We create the earth

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good production, good choice of sounds. At first the song took me to a jungle, but when melody started all change and took me to a japanese geisha dance. Like the polyrhithms used, and melody is easy to memorize.

Constructive Comments: for me this song could be better in new age category. Song should have ended at 350, in fade and not abruptly as is it now.

Broadjam Artist: Eric Lives Here
Song: Victory

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: Good overall production, good choice of sounds, the song is energetic,has a good and memorable melody. as well as the beat. Voice is suitable for this song, marks the excitement of it. I enjoyed listening to it. good work.

Constructive Comments: do not know this song fits in electronic, for me sounds more rock.

Broadjam Artist: Mike Cantwell – TalentEast Productions
Song: A Moment in Time (Female vocal – Country)

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: a very pleasant song about love. two people meeting and falling in love is always chance.

Constructive Comments: lyrics were very positive about love. very pleasant song. vocals were good.

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: My Kenworth Motel ( … from “Modern Progress”)

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: certainly love has been found in stranger places than in the back of a truck. reminds me of all those songs of finding love in the back of a 1957 Chevy. good song to remember the past.

Constructive Comments: the lyrics were good for remembering the past. good song overall. enjoyed it very much.

Broadjam Artist: Joe Stewart
Song: You Gotta Feel It

Reviewer: tim meyers

Positive Comments: you are certainly right. you have got to feel love or it will not last. very good beat with the instruments.

Constructive Comments: very enjoyable song overall. takes a positive look on love. I like that. great job. keep up the work. I want to hear more from you.