Peer Song Reviews From Broadjam.com
Broadjam Artist: SeedMusikGroup
Song: LA
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This comes in like a Stevie Wonder album cut with a lazy groove and wistful mood. I’d file under R&B rather than Pop. This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Constructive Comments: This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Broadjam Artist: SeedMusikGroup
Song: LA
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This comes in like a Stevie Wonder album cut with a lazy groove and wistful mood. I’d file under R&B rather than Pop. This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Constructive Comments: This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Broadjam Artist: SeedMusikGroup
Song: LA
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This comes in like a Stevie Wonder album cut with a lazy groove and wistful mood. I’d file under R&B rather than Pop. This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Constructive Comments: This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Broadjam Artist: SeedMusikGroup
Song: LA
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This comes in like a Stevie Wonder album cut with a lazy groove and wistful mood. I’d file under R&B rather than Pop. This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Constructive Comments: This is a great mood. Now take it and make a song!!
Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: Stay By My Side
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Great sound here on the drums and guitar. The intro guitar Jeez I love that chorus–really great lyrics/melody/changes moments there–it really soars. Just as good is the little turnaround just before the chorus–it reminds me of Julian Hatfield’s My Sister, which is a favorite of mine. And the turnaround, pause after the chorus also has a great guitar mood. Good choice of Motown backbeat on the bridge. About a minute in I realized this is John Masarone who’s one of the most talented guitarists & arrangers on the site! There are some sublimely good moments in this work.
Constructive Comments: You kinda lost me on the first verse–the intro had such a great mood with superb guitar part but then you really abruptly change gears–with kinda of wimpy jamband dang-a-lang strumming that’s overtracked. The voice is pitchy on the first verse and the phrasing/melody is kinda draggy. Man I wish I could just hang out and work on this tune with you. There is so much that’s great here!
Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: Stay By My Side
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Great sound here on the drums and guitar. The intro guitar Jeez I love that chorus–really great lyrics/melody/changes moments there–it really soars. Just as good is the little turnaround just before the chorus–it reminds me of Julian Hatfield’s My Sister, which is a favorite of mine. And the turnaround, pause after the chorus also has a great guitar mood. Good choice of Motown backbeat on the bridge. About a minute in I realized this is John Masarone who’s one of the most talented guitarists & arrangers on the site! There are some sublimely good moments in this work.
Constructive Comments: You kinda lost me on the first verse–the intro had such a great mood with superb guitar part but then you really abruptly change gears–with kinda of wimpy jamband dang-a-lang strumming that’s overtracked. The voice is pitchy on the first verse and the phrasing/melody is kinda draggy. Man I wish I could just hang out and work on this tune with you. There is so much that’s great here!
Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: Stay By My Side
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Great sound here on the drums and guitar. The intro guitar Jeez I love that chorus–really great lyrics/melody/changes moments there–it really soars. Just as good is the little turnaround just before the chorus–it reminds me of Julian Hatfield’s My Sister, which is a favorite of mine. And the turnaround, pause after the chorus also has a great guitar mood. Good choice of Motown backbeat on the bridge. About a minute in I realized this is John Masarone who’s one of the most talented guitarists & arrangers on the site! There are some sublimely good moments in this work.
Constructive Comments: You kinda lost me on the first verse–the intro had such a great mood with superb guitar part but then you really abruptly change gears–with kinda of wimpy jamband dang-a-lang strumming that’s overtracked. The voice is pitchy on the first verse and the phrasing/melody is kinda draggy. Man I wish I could just hang out and work on this tune with you. There is so much that’s great here!
Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: Stay By My Side
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Great sound here on the drums and guitar. The intro guitar Jeez I love that chorus–really great lyrics/melody/changes moments there–it really soars. Just as good is the little turnaround just before the chorus–it reminds me of Julian Hatfield’s My Sister, which is a favorite of mine. And the turnaround, pause after the chorus also has a great guitar mood. Good choice of Motown backbeat on the bridge. About a minute in I realized this is John Masarone who’s one of the most talented guitarists & arrangers on the site! There are some sublimely good moments in this work.
Constructive Comments: You kinda lost me on the first verse–the intro had such a great mood with superb guitar part but then you really abruptly change gears–with kinda of wimpy jamband dang-a-lang strumming that’s overtracked. The voice is pitchy on the first verse and the phrasing/melody is kinda draggy. Man I wish I could just hang out and work on this tune with you. There is so much that’s great here!
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Don’t Run Anymore / Pop Alternative
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a very promising hook. Now write the dang song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Constructive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a promising hook. Now write the song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Don’t Run Anymore / Pop Alternative
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a very promising hook. Now write the dang song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Constructive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a promising hook. Now write the song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Don’t Run Anymore / Pop Alternative
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a very promising hook. Now write the dang song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Constructive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a promising hook. Now write the song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Don’t Run Anymore / Pop Alternative
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a very promising hook. Now write the dang song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Constructive Comments: This is Kenney asking for a review of an idea. This one has a promising hook. Now write the song, and I’ll review it with enthusiasm.
Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: VICTORYReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: This is classic program music with a pomp and circumstances vibe. With a real brass section this would sound sound good (sounds good as is though). All hail the queen!!Construc…
Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: VICTORY
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This is classic program music with a pomp and circumstances vibe. With a real brass section this would sound sound good (sounds good as is though). All hail the queen!!
Constructive Comments: Real horns needed. I know, who’s got thousands to spend on hiring a horn section?
Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: VICTORYReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: This is classic program music with a pomp and circumstances vibe. With a real brass section this would sound sound good (sounds good as is though). All hail the queen!!Construc…
Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: VICTORY
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This is classic program music with a pomp and circumstances vibe. With a real brass section this would sound sound good (sounds good as is though). All hail the queen!!
Constructive Comments: Real horns needed. I know, who’s got thousands to spend on hiring a horn section?
Broadjam Artist: PowerklashSong: Kick AssReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: Honest to goodness Hard Rock! This is tight tight tight and intense with great playing and arrangement. The part where the riffing goes in slow triplets while the snare…
Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Kick Ass
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Honest to goodness Hard Rock! This is tight tight tight and intense with great playing and arrangement. The part where the riffing goes in slow triplets while the snare does a roll at 1:30 is just awesome (1) to think of doing it all and (2) to pull it off perfectly. And then that break at 1:49 is like something Zappa and the Mothers would have done. This is outstanding work with a huge amount of arrangement originality and musicianship. It’s not the kinda thing I’d listen to these days but I really enjoyed this!!
Constructive Comments: The drums are super tight and aggressive but the sound is not there. It sounds like a live recorded track? If you get get more presence and tone from the snare and some air in the overheads it would add a lot. The playing is outstanding though. Kinda the same w vocals –good job but the engineering isn’t there. The drop out break at 2mins is too empty as is –needs something melodically on top–but it’s really arty.
Broadjam Artist: PowerklashSong: Kick AssReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: Honest to goodness Hard Rock! This is tight tight tight and intense with great playing and arrangement. The part where the riffing goes in slow triplets while the snare…
Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Kick Ass
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Honest to goodness Hard Rock! This is tight tight tight and intense with great playing and arrangement. The part where the riffing goes in slow triplets while the snare does a roll at 1:30 is just awesome (1) to think of doing it all and (2) to pull it off perfectly. And then that break at 1:49 is like something Zappa and the Mothers would have done. This is outstanding work with a huge amount of arrangement originality and musicianship. It’s not the kinda thing I’d listen to these days but I really enjoyed this!!
Constructive Comments: The drums are super tight and aggressive but the sound is not there. It sounds like a live recorded track? If you get get more presence and tone from the snare and some air in the overheads it would add a lot. The playing is outstanding though. Kinda the same w vocals –good job but the engineering isn’t there. The drop out break at 2mins is too empty as is –needs something melodically on top–but it’s really arty.