Last Free Man In America by Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff MaguireSong: Last Free Man In AmericaReviewer: Keith TaylorPositive Comments: The concept of this song was interesting.Constructive Comments: I am really sorry but it wasn’t my cup of tea. I listened twice trying to figure out why…

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Last Free Man In America

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: The concept of this song was interesting.

Constructive Comments: I am really sorry but it wasn’t my cup of tea. I listened twice trying to figure out why and I don’t know.

Change by FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSSSong: ChangeReviewer: Keith TaylorPositive Comments: Very cool song! It was a retro feel that I really like.Constructive Comments: I think you should get a producer to help punch up the recording because it is really close.I …

FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Change

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Very cool song! It was a retro feel that I really like.

Constructive Comments: I think you should get a producer to help punch up the recording because it is really close.I was confused about the line about believing in Santa Claus etc.I would consider change it to something like “I believe in things that nobody else believes” It is just that that line made me go “What?”

Change by FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSSSong: ChangeReviewer: Keith TaylorPositive Comments: Very cool song! It was a retro feel that I really like.Constructive Comments: I think you should get a producer to help punch up the recording because it is really close.I …

FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Change

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Very cool song! It was a retro feel that I really like.

Constructive Comments: I think you should get a producer to help punch up the recording because it is really close.I was confused about the line about believing in Santa Claus etc.I would consider change it to something like “I believe in things that nobody else believes” It is just that that line made me go “What?”

Not Dreaming by Powerklash

Powerklash

Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Not Dreaming

Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol

Positive Comments: Good work. First thing that comes to mind is Local H, HIM, Soul asylum, (early royal bliss) to name a few. great writing & composition. Lyrics are great. Guitar work is spot on. Keep up the good work. Great drums, the song is very well put-together. great hooks. “you gave all that you could give but the well came up dry”. well thought out stuff.

Constructive Comments: Ummm…?? Im sure any thing we say here is stuff this band already knows. Mixing & mastering stuff mostly. ummm its pretty good. our bass player says more bass, but you know bass players. honestly cant think of a whole lot here. so again great job and looking forward to hearing more. more cow bell? uhhh the snare hits could be a little more present more fatness and crack, could be the head phones we are using. again great job all of you.

Powerklash

Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Not Dreaming

Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol

Positive Comments: Good work. First thing that comes to mind is Local H, HIM, Soul asylum, (early royal bliss) to name a few. great writing & composition. Lyrics are great. Guitar work is spot on. Keep up the good work. Great drums, the song is very well put-together. great hooks. “you gave all that you could give but the well came up dry”. well thought out stuff.

Constructive Comments: Ummm…?? Im sure any thing we say here is stuff this band already knows. Mixing & mastering stuff mostly. ummm its pretty good. our bass player says more bass, but you know bass players. honestly cant think of a whole lot here. so again great job and looking forward to hearing more. more cow bell? uhhh the snare hits could be a little more present more fatness and crack, could be the head phones we are using. again great job all of you.

Not Dreaming by Powerklash

Powerklash

Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Not Dreaming

Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol

Positive Comments: Good work. First thing that comes to mind is Local H, HIM, Soul asylum, (early royal bliss) to name a few. great writing & composition. Lyrics are great. Guitar work is spot on. Keep up the good work. Great drums, the song is very well put-together. great hooks. “you gave all that you could give but the well came up dry”. well thought out stuff.

Constructive Comments: Ummm…?? Im sure any thing we say here is stuff this band already knows. Mixing & mastering stuff mostly. ummm its pretty good. our bass player says more bass, but you know bass players. honestly cant think of a whole lot here. so again great job and looking forward to hearing more. more cow bell? uhhh the snare hits could be a little more present more fatness and crack, could be the head phones we are using. again great job all of you.

Powerklash

Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Not Dreaming

Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol

Positive Comments: Good work. First thing that comes to mind is Local H, HIM, Soul asylum, (early royal bliss) to name a few. great writing & composition. Lyrics are great. Guitar work is spot on. Keep up the good work. Great drums, the song is very well put-together. great hooks. “you gave all that you could give but the well came up dry”. well thought out stuff.

Constructive Comments: Ummm…?? Im sure any thing we say here is stuff this band already knows. Mixing & mastering stuff mostly. ummm its pretty good. our bass player says more bass, but you know bass players. honestly cant think of a whole lot here. so again great job and looking forward to hearing more. more cow bell? uhhh the snare hits could be a little more present more fatness and crack, could be the head phones we are using. again great job all of you.

be my valentine by lost on foot

Broadjam Artist: lost on footSong: be my valentineReviewer: Kalyx PistolPositive Comments: Candle Box is a well known band that comes to mind,maybe a little tonic, This singers tone is listenable,pretty ok. The riffs are cool. i like the overall Melody…

lost on foot

Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: be my valentine

Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol

Positive Comments: Candle Box is a well known band that comes to mind,maybe a little tonic, This singers tone is listenable,pretty ok. The riffs are cool. i like the overall Melody. The lyrics, in content are not bad, but maybe rephrasing the ideas here would lead to lyrics that could lend to vocalizations with a tighter beat structure/ iambic pentameter.

Constructive Comments: Open up on the chorus make it bigger vocally and musically. tighten up the hook focus on the catch phrase and really sum up what the song is saying. bass! more bottom end. and the over all guitar tome could be warmer/fatter, but is clear and over all listenable. Wet up the vocals a bit just a little or a lot.

Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax by Margie & Art Corey

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax

Reviewer: Powerklash

Positive Comments: very cool! super freak…great job putting all the different parts together. lots of changes to keep it interesting.

Constructive Comments: I like it just the way it is…Nice work!

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax

Reviewer: Powerklash

Positive Comments: very cool! super freak…great job putting all the different parts together. lots of changes to keep it interesting.

Constructive Comments: I like it just the way it is…Nice work!

Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax by Margie & Art Corey

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax

Reviewer: Powerklash

Positive Comments: very cool! super freak…great job putting all the different parts together. lots of changes to keep it interesting.

Constructive Comments: I like it just the way it is…Nice work!

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax

Reviewer: Powerklash

Positive Comments: very cool! super freak…great job putting all the different parts together. lots of changes to keep it interesting.

Constructive Comments: I like it just the way it is…Nice work!

CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS by Charlie Shock

Broadjam Artist: Charlie ShockSong: CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUSReviewer: PowerklashPositive Comments: Strong drummer, really catchy guitar partsConstructive Comments: The recording sounds very compresssed. Lots of very cool stuff happening but it sometimes ge…

Charlie Shock

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS

Reviewer: Powerklash

Positive Comments: Strong drummer, really catchy guitar parts

Constructive Comments: The recording sounds very compresssed. Lots of very cool stuff happening but it sometimes gets lost in the mix. I could not understand the words…at all. but still this is a very good song.

CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS by Charlie Shock

Broadjam Artist: Charlie ShockSong: CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUSReviewer: PowerklashPositive Comments: Strong drummer, really catchy guitar partsConstructive Comments: The recording sounds very compresssed. Lots of very cool stuff happening but it sometimes ge…

Charlie Shock

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS

Reviewer: Powerklash

Positive Comments: Strong drummer, really catchy guitar parts

Constructive Comments: The recording sounds very compresssed. Lots of very cool stuff happening but it sometimes gets lost in the mix. I could not understand the words…at all. but still this is a very good song.