Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.WebbSong: CHERRY ON THE TOPReviewer: Rebekah WithakayPositive Comments: I like the lyrics.I think it could fit well on TV/Film soundtrack on a comedy show. It’s fun and whimsical, brings a smile, like similar to an SNL sketch so…
Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: CHERRY ON THE TOP
Reviewer: Rebekah Withakay
Positive Comments: I like the lyrics.I think it could fit well on TV/Film soundtrack on a comedy show. It’s fun and whimsical, brings a smile, like similar to an SNL sketch song.
Constructive Comments: The only thing I think that could improve it is slight pitch correction in a couple spots.Check ( adding the times in the song for specific spots):”It’s obvious” at the very beginning of first verse.”Icing on the” at 0 :43″Baby” at 0:54″anytime soon” at 1:26″compromise” at 2:22
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: I Will Be Redeemed
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: Well, first off, GREAT VOCALS and guitar picking & playing!!! Almost has a Paul Simon feel, the lyrics are certainly unique and some I’m not sure I get, but when I eventually see the written lyrics….I will review them further!! The Overall song has a wonderful feel……excellent performance!!!
Constructive Comments: I guess I am just having a difficult time understanding, where the composer is going lyrically with this tune?? The composition really invites the listener in to sit down and contemplate the words……and that’s always a positive thing!! Grand Job Sir!!!!
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: I Will Be Redeemed
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: Well, first off, GREAT VOCALS and guitar picking & playing!!! Almost has a Paul Simon feel, the lyrics are certainly unique and some I’m not sure I get, but when I eventually see the written lyrics….I will review them further!! The Overall song has a wonderful feel……excellent performance!!!
Constructive Comments: I guess I am just having a difficult time understanding, where the composer is going lyrically with this tune?? The composition really invites the listener in to sit down and contemplate the words……and that’s always a positive thing!! Grand Job Sir!!!!
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: I Will Be Redeemed
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: Well, first off, GREAT VOCALS and guitar picking & playing!!! Almost has a Paul Simon feel, the lyrics are certainly unique and some I’m not sure I get, but when I eventually see the written lyrics….I will review them further!! The Overall song has a wonderful feel……excellent performance!!!
Constructive Comments: I guess I am just having a difficult time understanding, where the composer is going lyrically with this tune?? The composition really invites the listener in to sit down and contemplate the words……and that’s always a positive thing!! Grand Job Sir!!!!
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: I Will Be Redeemed
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: Well, first off, GREAT VOCALS and guitar picking & playing!!! Almost has a Paul Simon feel, the lyrics are certainly unique and some I’m not sure I get, but when I eventually see the written lyrics….I will review them further!! The Overall song has a wonderful feel……excellent performance!!!
Constructive Comments: I guess I am just having a difficult time understanding, where the composer is going lyrically with this tune?? The composition really invites the listener in to sit down and contemplate the words……and that’s always a positive thing!! Grand Job Sir!!!!
Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: ICE MARCH (instrumental)Reviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: If this is really jazz, I’d call it “Battle-Jazz.” It’s the first time I ever heard in this genre that reminds me of Celtic or Irish music. I love the melody…
Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ICE MARCH (instrumental)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: If this is really jazz, I’d call it “Battle-Jazz.” It’s the first time I ever heard in this genre that reminds me of Celtic or Irish music. I love the melody line and the majestic-ness of this track! It seems to tell a story and builds so nicely. Perhaps it could make its way into a movie. Obviously whoever created it knew what they were doing and did an amazing job. The hook is extremely memorable. Fantastic job!
Constructive Comments: The ending just…ended! Why not have it go out a bit more beautifully, gradually…something. It was too anti-climactic for the song,in my opinion. I am not a jazz aficionado. Is this really jazz? What makes it jazz? The instrument at the beginning reminded me of a harmonica…was it really a horn?
Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: ICE MARCH (instrumental)Reviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: If this is really jazz, I’d call it “Battle-Jazz.” It’s the first time I ever heard in this genre that reminds me of Celtic or Irish music. I love the melody…
Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ICE MARCH (instrumental)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: If this is really jazz, I’d call it “Battle-Jazz.” It’s the first time I ever heard in this genre that reminds me of Celtic or Irish music. I love the melody line and the majestic-ness of this track! It seems to tell a story and builds so nicely. Perhaps it could make its way into a movie. Obviously whoever created it knew what they were doing and did an amazing job. The hook is extremely memorable. Fantastic job!
Constructive Comments: The ending just…ended! Why not have it go out a bit more beautifully, gradually…something. It was too anti-climactic for the song,in my opinion. I am not a jazz aficionado. Is this really jazz? What makes it jazz? The instrument at the beginning reminded me of a harmonica…was it really a horn?
Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: He’s Still King
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of Religious Music, so I will be a tough reviewer…….sorry!! I actually really like the sound of the lead vocal, has a Bob Dylan, Tom Petty quality to it!! You might try using Band-in-A-Box to construct your compositions, they use real players and will make the over all music sound a tad more polished. Using BIABox….it’s as if you are hiring live session players for your composition. These are just a few suggestions and just one person’s opinion, see what other Broad Jam Members say about your song?
Constructive Comments: I think I have made the comments that are pertinent in the above reply!!Best of Luck and whatever you do….ALWAYS KEEP WRITING SIR!!!
Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: He’s Still King
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of Religious Music, so I will be a tough reviewer…….sorry!! I actually really like the sound of the lead vocal, has a Bob Dylan, Tom Petty quality to it!! You might try using Band-in-A-Box to construct your compositions, they use real players and will make the over all music sound a tad more polished. Using BIABox….it’s as if you are hiring live session players for your composition. These are just a few suggestions and just one person’s opinion, see what other Broad Jam Members say about your song?
Constructive Comments: I think I have made the comments that are pertinent in the above reply!!Best of Luck and whatever you do….ALWAYS KEEP WRITING SIR!!!
Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: He’s Still King
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of Religious Music, so I will be a tough reviewer…….sorry!! I actually really like the sound of the lead vocal, has a Bob Dylan, Tom Petty quality to it!! You might try using Band-in-A-Box to construct your compositions, they use real players and will make the over all music sound a tad more polished. Using BIABox….it’s as if you are hiring live session players for your composition. These are just a few suggestions and just one person’s opinion, see what other Broad Jam Members say about your song?
Constructive Comments: I think I have made the comments that are pertinent in the above reply!!Best of Luck and whatever you do….ALWAYS KEEP WRITING SIR!!!
Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: He’s Still King
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: I am not a huge fan of Religious Music, so I will be a tough reviewer…….sorry!! I actually really like the sound of the lead vocal, has a Bob Dylan, Tom Petty quality to it!! You might try using Band-in-A-Box to construct your compositions, they use real players and will make the over all music sound a tad more polished. Using BIABox….it’s as if you are hiring live session players for your composition. These are just a few suggestions and just one person’s opinion, see what other Broad Jam Members say about your song?
Constructive Comments: I think I have made the comments that are pertinent in the above reply!!Best of Luck and whatever you do….ALWAYS KEEP WRITING SIR!!!
Broadjam Artist: Ken LehnigSong: She Belongs To MeReviewer: Anita AndreisPositive Comments: Love how this song flows and passionate singing! Constructive Comments: It reminds me a bit on “Somebody that I used to know”… but it’s ok… It is a differen…
Broadjam Artist: Ken Lehnig
Song: She Belongs To Me
Reviewer: Anita Andreis
Positive Comments: Love how this song flows and passionate singing!
Constructive Comments: It reminds me a bit on “Somebody that I used to know”… but it’s ok… It is a different song after all 😀 Congrats! I knew right from the beginning this has something different. Good work!
Broadjam Artist: Ken LehnigSong: She Belongs To MeReviewer: Anita AndreisPositive Comments: Love how this song flows and passionate singing! Constructive Comments: It reminds me a bit on “Somebody that I used to know”… but it’s ok… It is a differen…
Broadjam Artist: Ken Lehnig
Song: She Belongs To Me
Reviewer: Anita Andreis
Positive Comments: Love how this song flows and passionate singing!
Constructive Comments: It reminds me a bit on “Somebody that I used to know”… but it’s ok… It is a different song after all 😀 Congrats! I knew right from the beginning this has something different. Good work!
Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Kick Ass
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: Great Electric Guitar playing!!! The lead vocal is strong!! The break into the acrostic guitar part is very COOL!! My favorite part of the song!! I would love to hear more of the softer, gentler side of this composer, he’s nailed the Heavy Metal Stuff!!! This Genre of music is just not my cup of Tea, but again, it’s perfectly executed GREAT JOB SIR!!!
Constructive Comments: Slight suggestion, make the lyrics easier to understand. You obviously have something to say, so as a listener one needs to hear the words……
Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Kick Ass
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: Great Electric Guitar playing!!! The lead vocal is strong!! The break into the acrostic guitar part is very COOL!! My favorite part of the song!! I would love to hear more of the softer, gentler side of this composer, he’s nailed the Heavy Metal Stuff!!! This Genre of music is just not my cup of Tea, but again, it’s perfectly executed GREAT JOB SIR!!!
Constructive Comments: Slight suggestion, make the lyrics easier to understand. You obviously have something to say, so as a listener one needs to hear the words……