Month: November 2017

Broadjam Artist: Jonah Wayz
Song: The Tale of a Loser

Reviewer: JC

Positive Comments: Your voice is good, but the song needs to grab you from the get go.Good effortKeep at it

Constructive Comments: Needs a hook.Something to get captivation.Try more banger type beats.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Second Chance (country male demo)

Reviewer: Marilyn Hall

Positive Comments: I like the lyric and the vocal works good with the song. Instrumental is understated letting the lyric and vocalstand out.

Constructive Comments: excellent song and lyric.

Broadjam Artist: Joseph Miller
Song: Pretty Lady

Reviewer: Sound Preservation Records

Positive Comments: Beautiful song, wonderful nostalgic melody and very touching emotional lyrics. The vocal sounds like a unique cross between David Bowie and Larry Graham. If only they still wrote em like this. Great job, 5 stars.

Constructive Comments: Needs a lot of work in the mix department. Vocals are too up front with music in the distant back, and the mix is in mono. However, by the sounds of the recording, im gonna guess this was a demo take pulled from an old cassette? If the multi tracks still exist, would for sure consider pulling them out, transferring them to digital and mixing it fresh, because it’s a really great tune! 🙂

Broadjam Artist: Trinity
Song: Cold Sweat

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: like the combo instruments, good on key changes, reminds me of a good song for driving somewhere.

Constructive Comments: Nice as is but I don’t detect a bass in here which would add a lot. also a stop along the way would help this number. or some type of break—it gets a little bit monotonous.Still pretty good grade from this ole music teacher!Keep On Truckin!=============Catnip Pat============

Broadjam Artist: Steve Robinson
Song: Little Rock and Roller

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Love these nasty ole blues Great mix! Down and dirty!Love the theme as I fall into this category Ha Ha!

Constructive Comments: Nice job! Where is that harp Player when you need him? I would turn the bass and drums up just a TAD if you get a chance to remix this. Also would add a bit more bass on this nice vocal!Keep On Truckin!=============catnip=======================

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: back again (2006)

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: like the instrumentation, good mix, flowing nicely,tasty guitarreminds me of early steely dan.

Constructive Comments: yes i would like to help you but i think youve got it covered pretty squarly. of course i would like to add a vocal but its great just the way it is!keep on truckin!=============catnip====================================

Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Climb

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: The Vocal sounds a little like Gram Nash. Killer Guitar playing thru-out. Also has a Yes sound in the music. Boy, you can get any better than this combination……Just an all around excellent combination, GREAT JOB!! The tune comes at you like machine gun fire, non-stop, takes your breath away! Fine song Sir, look forward to hearing more of your tunes!!!

Constructive Comments: My only additional thought would be, have a slight respite in your musical composition…….just a thought?? You might use a break down?? Perhaps use the music from the ending of your song and incorporate it into a part in the tune?? Love the Ending Music, HUGE DUDE!!!!

Broadjam Artist: Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter
Song: Blue Sunhine/with Penny Towers Wilber

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: nice to hear this arrangement,how original!

Constructive Comments: maybe its me but the bass seems to be missing or very low in the background. the two angles was good could fit in a movie or film!

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Earth River (Instru-#1 New Age Alternative)

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good overall production. good piano licks with easy to remember melody. Like the change in rhythm at 3:36, that males the song with new vitality. good luci with this one

Constructive Comments: no cons good as it is

Broadjam Artist: Trinity
Song: Tenebrae

Reviewer: RICARDO ALONSO

Positive Comments: good overall production. Song has a mysterious mood, well proyected by singers voice that fits perfect for the moods song. Instrumentation is simple but effective

Constructive Comments: maybe could be shorter in time