Month: June 2017

Broadjam Artist: HarryBudini
Song: Losing My Hair

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This has a very unique sounds.

Constructive Comments: It is a little too weird for my taste. Sorry.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Hard Rock Night

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: I like the hook. This song has potential.

Constructive Comments: I think the lyrics need a little work. They are a little cliche. I would also punch up the heaviness of this song. It has a good driving guitar but the overall feel is a little thin.

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: THE WAY LIFE GOES

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Sort of a cross between Sheryl Crow and Zack Brown, trop rock meets folk/pop somewhere between ” All I wanna Do ” and ” Toes ” well done track, definitely potential.

Constructive Comments: Well the recording is a tad weak but it is indie/lofi sooo … overall idea is good, voice is good, playing is solid enough, but the da da da da’s get old fast and at a certain point seem to be a substitute for any other better lyric. On balance the song itself has an incomplete quality.. even ” All I Wanna Do ” had an actual story line, however simple.

Broadjam Artist: TeflonByte
Song: Tule penkomaan

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Really rocks! Nice job.

Constructive Comments: I really wish there were lyrics for this song because it has potential.

Broadjam Artist: Hart Brothers
Song: Heavy Load of Love

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Fun song! Great lyrics! This would be a really good bar song.

Constructive Comments: The vocal melody is a little predictable.

Broadjam Artist: LaWanda Macik
Song: (Love) In The Classic Movies

Reviewer: LaWanda Lee

Positive Comments: nice feel good track , nice vocals , lead and background . Sounds a lot like Keith Sweat , Im sure you’ve heard it before ! overall nice track !

Constructive Comments: Nothing really to say but be clearer with your lyrics and dictation .

Broadjam Artist: George Molden
Song: i Want your Love

Reviewer: LaWanda Lee

Positive Comments: nice track , I could definitely write to it. Great Job , look forward to hearing more music from you

Constructive Comments: take out the stamp or male vocals , sounds good with , but give the listener a chance to create a song while listening

Broadjam Artist: The Song Writers
Song: Thierry Coupey’s ~ On Hold

Reviewer: LaWanda Lee

Positive Comments: nice instrumentation , good breaks .

Constructive Comments: be clearer with your speech and dictation , I couldn’t really hear what you were singing about , Also a change of genre , this is not really considered R&B

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Hung Up On You (female vocals)

Reviewer: LaWanda Lee

Positive Comments: This is more 60’s doo wop era . The sound is very dated , original for sure ! Great for top 40 lovers but definitely not R&B. Sound was ok , could be a little cleaner , overall an ok song , just very dated .

Constructive Comments: Maybe listen to the radio and see what the sound is in this era . You will pull a fan base , but it would be minimal , whereas if you updated your sound it would sound better

Broadjam Artist: Ante Novaselic
Song: Play Yah

Reviewer: joe pod

Positive Comments: Great groove, nice instrumentation, punchy drums. Good mix. unique vocal. The band has got it down.

Constructive Comments: The vocals- ah, yes. It sounds as though you can sing well, hit the pitches of the notes, give it attitude and life. Don’t do so much detuning on the vocal double it gives it a punky sound, but is too over the top-the pitches sound at times way off. I wanna hear more of your voice and less effect. Also, you might try doubling only the choruses in this song-it would help them stand out from the verses. The thing is, once the listener has heard an effect early on and it has no dynamic movement, it loses its ability to keep ’em listening. If you are doing these fx to vocals deliberately, cool. But I have found that average music fans don’t want to be challenged to much when they listen to a song- they just wanna hear what feels familiar to them. Cool track1