Month: March 2017

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Without You

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: Good arrangement and classic pop-sound.

Constructive Comments: Very common lyrics (too many cliches).

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: The Salvation Song (Roberts Dunkle Band)

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: Very poetic lyrics, the arrangement is far from common. The melody corresponds to the words/vocals.

Constructive Comments: The recording (the sound) could be a bit smoother, but all together very good song.

Broadjam Artist: Peter Toussaint
Song: Sunrise

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: Well played, the arrangement is very good. The song has a huge potential to be used as chill/lounge music.

Constructive Comments: Not much can be said as a constructive comment, maybe in a way the melody is very common.

Broadjam Artist: J Edna Mae Thomas
Song: Beautiful Day

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Good pop sounding song! With lots of variety musically! Production is well engineered and the vocals were well done. Reminds me of a song that will be played in a “Tween” movie or series, has childlike innocence. Good job!

Constructive Comments: Lyrics should be reviewed if you are trying to reach a more mature generation, if not then disregard this comment.all good!

Broadjam Artist: The Pursuit from the Original Wilson Mower Pursuit Detroit
Song: She Makes Me Happy – Shaggs Vocal

Reviewer: Lisa Vivienne

Positive Comments: Reminds me of the Beatles! Good vibe and sound! Good job!

Constructive Comments: Could not hear the lyrics, perhaps due to recording or just because of the style of the song. If you were trying to bring back an old type of vibe, you certainly nailed it cause I cant for the life of me think if I have heard this song before…Not really sure if it will do well in today’s “modern” era but h I am sure there are plenty of fans out there who will enjoy going down memory lane with this type of song.

Broadjam Artist: Gladstone Avenue
Song: DARK EYES (country)

Reviewer: Rainier Artists

Positive Comments: Simply exceptional. Intriguing song performed very professionally. I’m excited to hear more from this artist.

Constructive Comments: See above.

Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)
Song: Over The Hill (2)

Reviewer: Rainier Artists

Positive Comments: Instrumentals are great.

Constructive Comments: The singers’ voices should be more predominant on the recording.

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Goodbye, That’s All She Wrote (Country)

Reviewer: Rainier Artists

Positive Comments: Good sound. I’d like to hear more from this singer.

Constructive Comments: The singer’s voice should be more pronounced on the recording with the instrumentals more in the background. This guy’s got a great voice . . . let’s hear it better.

Broadjam Artist: Ricky John Brown
Song: Small Town Bar and Grill

Reviewer: Rainier Artists

Positive Comments: Good instrumental.

Constructive Comments: The singer has a style like Dylan. I like it.

Broadjam Artist: Chip Salerno
Song: Fanfare for the New Year

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: This song has such a great sound – I really like the keyboards and special effects – Major Motion Picture Stuff!

Constructive Comments: Very cool sound – I think that I would add a few more special effects, maybe seagull sounds – best wishes!