Month: August 2016

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Made in China

Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM

Positive Comments: * strong vocal harmonies* tempo changes are unique novelty/Broadway musical genre* lyric has a clear universal message * piano backing fits song stylistically* a 1920’s number with a 21st century theme

Constructive Comments: + production is simple, but feel and message is clearly there + “chopsticks” piano variation may be unique to Japan “The Land of the Rising Sun” and not China some historian types or music history majors might have issues with “wrong” representation for musical hook + like the vocals and piano backing alot+ write a musical!

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Christian Walk

Reviewer: Prejippie Music Group

Positive Comments: The song sounds like a Tom Petty or David Bowie style. The vocalist sounds sincere and the lyrics make the theme apparent right from the beginning. The arrangement is good varying the verse, change, and chorus, which keeps the song interesting. The length of the song was good, which allows a listener to enjoy the song, but ends before it overstays its welcome. Overall, this is an interesting and powerful song.

Constructive Comments: The mix could have been better. The main vocal seemed a little too high in the mix. Other than that, the song is good. Keep up the uplifting work!!

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Great Commission

Reviewer: Prejippie Music Group

Positive Comments: The theme was apparent from the very start. The call and response helps the listener be able to actively participate in the experience. The song kicks right in, which means that listeners are immediately immersed in the song. The lyrics were well-thought out and not the typical, redundant variety. The male vocal background vocal was in a Sting-style and was interesting. I like the galloping horse sound effects. Overall, a very interesting and powerful song.

Constructive Comments: The arrangement of the song could have been better. The melody becomes repetitive after the first 2 verses. A break in that pattern would have made the verses more special. While I liked that there were parts for the man, woman and children was nice, but if they had been better arranged, I could have appreciated them better. Keep up the good work!!

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Uptown

Reviewer: Prejippie Music Group

Positive Comments: Great guitar work throughout. This song really seems like it could be or could have been the theme music for a 70s sitcom. It could also work for a show like the Rockford Files. Seems like you would have some licensing opportunities for 70s styled music. Overall, the song was well produced and well performed.

Constructive Comments: The mix could have been better. Although I really liked the way the guitar was played, it seemed to jump out of the mix in a few spots. Also, the intro was a bit too long for my taste. Other than that, great job and keep up the good work!!

Broadjam Artist: Bob Higgs
Song: Dreambody

Reviewer: Prejippie Music Group

Positive Comments: I really enjoyed the piano work. The harmonica was nicely played and really fit the style of the song. Good strong arrangement. Vocals have that Johnny Cash flavor to them. The song has very interesting mix of styles. A bit of country and a 60s psychedelic feel. The guitar solo at the end had that Prince Purple Rain vibe. Overall I thought the song was good. Thanks

Constructive Comments: Clocking in at over 6 minutes, I thought the song was a bit long. I think you could shorten the intro and maybe get rid of a verse. the diction could have been better so that the lyrics are clearer. I had a hard time figuring out what you were saying on the chorus. Other than that I have nothing else to say. Keep up the good work!!

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: March of the Militant

Reviewer: Jon Babb

Positive Comments: It’s like the moment before a battle when the troops are assembling and arming up for an epic showdown against the enemy. You really do a great job at telling a story through the music and giving us great material that could easily be used in a scene for a video game or TV show. I hope you continue creating masterpieces like this and let me know when you release more work! I love your music.

Constructive Comments: Everything sounds great to me. The subtle uses of instruments and the snare really drives the track forward. Excellent work on this.

Broadjam Artist: DENNIS MAKEPEACE
Song: castles and kings

Reviewer: Jon Babb

Positive Comments: A beautiful piece, and most certainly classic. You have performed the guitars perfectly, giving the whole song a professional sound. The melody tells a story in my mind, perhaps something like an old mountain pioneer tale. I think this could be used as a background track for a particular genre and for some reason I just get images of nature while listening to this. Excellent work on this!

Constructive Comments: Nothing to be added. I really enjoyed everything you did with this track.

Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: RnB Instrumental (80’s)

Reviewer: Jon Babb

Positive Comments: I could see myself enjoying a relaxing evening with a beautiful girl while listening to this track. It really has the 1990’s and early 2000’s written all over it, obviously. I can hear Brian McKnight or Boyz II Men as possible influences, and you should know that I love music like this. And my goodness, that lead at 2:16 really hits the spot! Great music that really hits home for a social butterfly like me, haha

Constructive Comments: I believe some have commented about the clap being loud, but it doesn’t really bother me too much. It’s just something to consider if you ever revisit this track.

Broadjam Artist: Billy Pilgrim
Song: Pulse Sing

Reviewer: Jon Babb

Positive Comments: It has a very distinctive sound similar to what I would hear on a crime drama on TV. Honestly though this is a broad genre, so it could really be used for a multitude of different projects or media. There is plenty of depth to the track, as the instruments and drums does a great job of making everything seem full. Excellent work on this! Let me know when you produce more, please!

Constructive Comments: Nothing much to add, really. It’s simple and it gets the job done effectively.

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Just Another Day

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: It has a nice feel to it. I liked the song. A few tweaks would make it really good.

Constructive Comments: There is a hard guitar sound that just does not go with the rest of the elody. I woud soften it a little, it took away from the great groove you have going on with the song.