Broadjam Artist: Cannimagine Productions
Song: Maiden in the Mist
Reviewer: John Walradt
Positive Comments: This is a very good story and concept…a true love in the imagination that’s just out of reach…a maiden in the mist. The melody drifts and shimmers like ocean waves which gives it more that ethereal, dreamy feel, and it compliments the story very well. Nice use of the midi with smooth production.
Constructive Comments: The most important aspects of any song are the base words and music, which you have successfully done very well, so high scores overall! What I’d have to suggest are just preferences. I would search for smoother vocals that can match the ethereal feel of the song, and can follow the melody more effortlessly. (This is why I very seldom use my own vocals…they’re terrible!) Perhaps experiment with a soft background ensemble that cascades with a higher pitch but use it conservatively…something to add variety, maybe to replace or put in the background small segments of the keyboards. One more…what I’d call a “singles” version…one that would have a shorter beginning and end. The beginning on such a version could easily begin at :29 seconds. Overall, very well done because the music and lyrics are by far most important. That’s probably 90 percent of it. The rest is frosting on the cake.