Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: The Photo In The Hall
Reviewer: William Cronin
Positive Comments: The Vocal tone is very appealing for the ear , the quality of the track was very well done.Great imagination but the structure of a song leads to an expectation of sorts , i found myself a little lost midway.
Constructive Comments: A story/tale/song within a long song of parts , maybe this song could have a long version and a short version , i would root out the core idea and create a big chorus to reflect the dramatic end for the short version , i am sure there is an audience for this type of song as it is now , but to reach a wider audience i would create a shorter version.