Broadjam Artist: hughett
Song: After The Leaving (demo)
Reviewer: John Walradt and Robert Quigley
Positive Comments: Working on the lyrics, eh? I understand. With excellent instrumentation and an an arrangement like this, you really want to tailor the lyrics to really fit the mood and that takes rewriting and time. I’m interested in hearing the melody line you’ve come up for this. So far this is looming, intense, and engaging with the musical emotion you’ve created.
Constructive Comments: You’re on track with this. Take care and time to get the lyrics you really want.