
Broadjam Artist: Watching Spaceships
Song: Pearshaped
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Nice quiet into builds nicely in to a very original song. Angels pray for me, then I smile (love that lyric!). Nice job on the vocals and instrumentation.
Constructive Comments: I wish you would post the lyrics! It might help me to understand everything you are trying to communicate in this song. There’s a lot that I didn’t understand. Work on clarity so that someone who doesn’t know you and has never heard you can understand exactly what you are saying/singing in your song.