Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: I Fell In
Reviewer: Peter Boynton
Positive Comments: Hi Greg.-Nice arrangement & production. Professional sound.-Good lyric story.-Good vocals – the singer’s voice is great to listen to-Nice conversational feel to the lyrics and lyric melody stays in small conversational range of @ a 4th – contemporary.
Constructive Comments: -The chorus needs a lift and contrast from the verses.-Maybe raise the pitch and range of the chorus lyric/melody and change where the lyric starts in the meter of the chorus measures. -If the chorus sets itself off from the verses and increases the tension and emotion of the song, this would work really well.-EASY adjustment, if any of this resonates with you.-Enjoyed the listen and thinking about it!