Broadjam Artist: jim Finan
Song: The Space Force
Reviewer: Diane RIDAEUS
Positive Comments: There’s some great parts and some not so great -:00 – 23 nice clean opening, the brass could use a bit of toning down (EQ)but nice fat chords.:27 – 47 – the rhythm is off and distracting from those nice strings in the bass:55 that transition doesn’t flow – try simplifying itGoes along nicely till 1:02, beautiful horn part there. Some transitions between sections, i.e. 1:11 are rough but you can smooth these outTo 1:41 – starts out nice then the feel gets lost in some chord changes that are a little distractingAtt 1:43 -2:21 this is the strongest part of the composition, KEEP IT! Develop it. Another rough transition at 1:21, then to 2:35 this part might be good on its own but it doesn’t fit with what came before very well. From 2:35 to 3:35 is VERY GOOD – could be a cue track on its own.4:20 and on (repeats earlier sections) so all above applies. I really like these specified parts, suggest separate them out for several different cues. Oh – watch the distortion at 4:05 – 4:17
Constructive Comments: A lot of good stuff, just needs to be separated out into distinct cues as they don’t necessarily flow one to the next. Transitions are rough in a few spots and watch the distortion at 4:05 – 4:17Mostly just sounds incomplete. The track is very long, but there are many shorter cues (more usable for tv/film spots) Keep going, there’s some nice developments and potential!