Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: RISE AGAIN (Rock-Easy Listening)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song packs a positive wisdom punch for sure. I love the message. It’s so encouraging and the lyrics are skillfully and thoughtfully written. This is no “throw together” song. “scattered bones/shattered dreams” great internal rhymes and images. grip/trip Unsure/blur. I am seeing a lot of creativity and zero triteness here. It reminds me of the scripture Proverbs 24:16. “For though the righteous fall 7 times, they rise again, but the wicked stumble when calamity strikes.” You’re right, the devil doesn’t win in the end. This is a great song.
Constructive Comments: The only thing I can suggest is a stronger, more definitive vocal. Keep the great music coming, Bill!