Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Hey Now
Reviewer: Einen
Positive Comments: Balance between vocals and instrumentation was great! Good pacing and energy. ‘No tongue in cheek so to speak Please take another peekRight into my soul” is a good line! Good job.
Constructive Comments: Repeat ‘Hey now’ more. Possible lyric change in your pre-chorus: The ones who left us tried to steal our hearts away. Pay attention! We deserve so much more today” Unhooked reminds me of a bra! Saying ‘So give your heart to me’ might do better to say ‘trust your heart with me’ again. Maybe ‘is it time you could surrender’ rather than it is time (demand). Keep working at it!