Broadjam Artist: Russ Steele
Song: 4 U
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This is a different kind of love song. Kind of a wishful thinking monologue on what a guy would do for his girl/wife if he had money. I like the part about sitting by the fire/lost in your eyes. That is a great lyric. Smile on your face/wind in your wings also a great thought. Definitely heartfelt and sincere.
Constructive Comments: Please post the lyrics to this song. I could not understand it all. For some reason, the piano sounds a little “off” to me. I don’t know if it’s out of tune, or if the effect you had on the piano made it seem weird. The way the lyrics come across to me sounds like the guy is poor…if he had money he’d do this and that for her (a pair of flip flops? doesn’t sound too romantic to me, sounds kind of cheap, but maybe that’s just my own values speaking, ha ha.) The flower sounded good though, and the little black dress. But I’ll play piano and you pay the rent…just comes across as too cheap.