
Broadjam Artist: Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter
Song: Can’t You See
Reviewer: Stanford
Positive Comments: Nice dual sound of classical guitar and vibraphone I think, driving this instrumental. Has a sort of French 60s style I feel. Romantic, wistful, love lost.
Constructive Comments: I think for the instrumentation a gentle touch of upright bass would fit well and give it some solid grounding. It’s just a little too all upper range. A breathy female chanteuse singing about love lost would be ideal.So it’s difficult for me to pick out a melody without that vocal, possibly a piano could drive a simple melody line barring a vocal for it otherwise the main ‘instrument’ is driving the arrangement and the melody.There’s a small touch of sample issue, an artifact at note end that’s noticeable in parts, the sample cutting off, you could either edit it shorter or cover with another sound maybe.