Broadjam Artist: Vivian M Woods
Song: This Is The Beginning
Reviewer: Stanford
Positive Comments: This is fun. I think it has commercial appeal as a novelty song related to education. The instrumentation is fun too, nice steel drums and interesting percussion.
Constructive Comments: I think the fun aspect could be played up a bit more. One line says your a Grandmother, if that’s the case then it should be repeated in the chorus, that’s the selling point, Grandma Sweet Bee. Would be a great feature to have some kids voices in the background too I think. Then I think you’ve got a radio friendly song with a good story and a bit of fun and pretty good rap too.The lyrics are pretty good but I do think there’s room for improvement to make more of the story.