Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Sleep
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This is an interesting song. The subject is sleep (or lack thereof) because the singer’s partner isn’t there. Nice pretty intro. I like the internal rhymes that occur throughout the song (affection, perfection, perspective, obsession). Not exact rhymes but comes across as clever. Passionate vocal, and love the Lah dee dahs. Nice touch on the percussion. Love the way the instrumentation backs off at the ending featuring the vocals being the last thing you hear. Nice job!
Constructive Comments: In the lyrics you have “I can take it”. Is that supposed to be “I can’t take it?”