Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Sleep
Reviewer: Tony Tersmette
Positive Comments: Chordal changes and arrangement work well. Instrumentation nice. Beatle-esque at points. Percussion entry at 1:19 very nice. Mix well suited to subject matter. A lot of the qualities that make a great pop tune are here. Appealing overall. What else ya got? 🙂
Constructive Comments: ‘Sleep’ theme as it appears at :39, 1:19 and 3:08 is nice I can here it being used elsewhere judiciously, for instance as a contrapuntal thing woven under ‘La dee dah dah …’ at a point later in song. Discreetly placed counterpoint vocals here and there could really ensnare ears, enrich this work and take it to the next level.