Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: lazy joe
Reviewer: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Positive Comments: Great recorded sounds, clean tracks. Kind of Creedence meets Larry Carlton. Really nice playing and musicianship. Love the breakdown around 2 minutes. The song maintains a level of control and maturity throughout. Snare drum is popping, the drum sound is great…. also the attention to detail in the guitar tone etc. is very good.
Constructive Comments: Maybe the hook could be stronger…. or use a grungier sound for the melody. No real solid theme jumping out to me making me sing it after the song is done but that’s hard to do with an instrumental. Song felt more like a controlled jam rather than a song with a strong melodic statement, if you’re going for more commercial acceptance I think a simple melody repeated between the solos would help.