Broadjam Artist: Benjamin Stone
Song: Stockton Symphony Pt 3: Caught In The Grey Day
Reviewer: jim Finan
Positive Comments: An easy soft melody with oboe leading the way to start. Motif getting transferred around the orchestra and establishing a solid foundation. The evhoing continues and builds a commanding statement of a simple melody. It becomes broader with time and says much more than ever imagined from the start. A very excellent piece and execution and expansion!
Constructive Comments: While this piece is complete on its own merit, the only further expansion would be maybe in a key hange, tempo, phrasing ,elongation of notes, a little counterpoint and even more dynamic adjustment. Its hard to improbe on the original idea and adding things make subtract from the statement made from the beginning. You, the composer hs the ultimate important say in the presentation! Excellent.