Broadjam Artist: John Hazlett
Song: 1st Piano Concerto 1st Movement
Reviewer: jim Finan
Positive Comments: Good theme at beginning and some layering of strings and other instruments.syncopation used to change the rhthmic patterns nicely.counterpoint beginning at introduction that adds interest and supports the quality of the melody. A difgerent melody introduced after a nice pause to grow attention on new segment.. a higher texture is added to the general theme especially at the end. Double ending to clarify that this is the end! Nice surprise completed!
Constructive Comments: . A very healthy rhythmic pattern set at the beginning setting off more instruments with a like pattern. To sustain the direction it could support a melodic change and counter instrumental patterns more to generate a picure that is ever enlarging. Perhaps a new instrument introduced will support the strong piano part. The strings, while fitting well with a line sustained,could perhaps add a little harmonic development and contribute some counter melody even more. It is up to you if any of this fits,and your decision and style will be your own. It stands ready with this! Very good job!