Broadjam Artist: Simpson-Mancine Productions
Song: When Ignorance was Bliss
Reviewer: Katilyn
Positive Comments: You’ve got a good voice and a unique sound.
Constructive Comments: Your hook, lyrically, is fine, but it doesn’t stand out enough in the song. Can you change the melody on it and drag out some notes and maybe echo the word bliss with some harmony bgvs? “when igorance waaaaaaas bliss (bliss bliss bliss bliss). Also, I would change the rhyming scheme so you rhyme with a different sound in each verse…it was just too much “iss” when the whole song rhymed with that one sound. Lastly, this is not country-rock…it’s country jazz (with the sax), or just straight country. There are no rock & roll elements to this song – recommend reclassifying!