Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Days Of Mystery
Reviewer: Katilyn
Positive Comments: Good recording quality
Constructive Comments: I wouldn’t classify this as pop…because this style of music isn’t what is most popular right now – see playlists like “Today’s Hits” on streaming services, for reference. The arrangement is pretty country, to me, so I’d reclassify it…and be sure to pitch to vintage recording opportunities! Lyrically…I think you could be more specific. Given an example of something that was mysterious that no longer is…is it the feel of her hand in your hand, the way she snores in her sleep, how she looks when she cries? Back in the days songs are very common, so I think you could rework your lyrics a bit to make yours more original.