Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Can’t Take It Back Coreys
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts-somewhat–I loved the guitar. I wanted this song to take me on a musical journey. The music track was too loud and I couldn’t hear the lyrics clearly. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening notes draw you in and make you want to hear more? Yes 3) Is my melody interesting? Yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my music stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my music easy to listen along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? clap 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Longing 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? yes if the volume of the music track war lower so I could hear the lyrics.