Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Gone To The City Paulie
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: I wanted more specific in the verses and the big payoff in the chorus. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? somewhat 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? somewhat 3) Is my melody interesting? somewhat 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? somewhat 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? dance 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? longing 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? somewhat 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? yes with more specific lyrics