Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: I’ve Been Up & I’ve Been Down Corey’s
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocal and the music. I wanted more specific of why the girl did what she did in the verses and the big payoff in the chorus. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? somewhat 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? dance 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? longing 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? somewhat 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? yes with more specific lyrics