Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Invisible
Reviewer: John Walradt
Positive Comments: What a personal song of sensitivity and hurt that cannot be ignored! A song with an important message from the soul. The melody is easy to follow, lyrically tells the story clearly, gets to the point, the frustrations, the criticisms from others, the dreams and desires that look so far away. Instrumentally minimal with pounding keyboards to emphasize the emotion. Exasperated, excellent vocals…what else could possibly carry such lyrics…and at the end it ends with hoping to remain invisible to avoid any more pain. This song would work well in several places, from documentaries, things regarding health, or a personal story in a video.
Constructive Comments: Songs like these need to be written and heard. There is so much surface stuff out there and I say there’s very much needed room for art and songs that make you think, make you consider, make you feel and to see things from a different angle. I hope you continue to write these along with all other aspects of life you want to share. Keep going with it!