Broadjam Artist: Groove Fondue
Song: Believe in Love
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: The music makes this song. Did you like specific instrumental parts, lyrics–yes. I love the guitar playing. I think with better lyrics this could be a hit. I love the sentiment and the current lines but I know you can develop a better storyline. Great playing Jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1–character, context, setting chorus–give the big idea v2–take the big idea further bridge (if necessary) –take the big idea even further 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes–very catchy2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? Some what 3) Is my melody interesting? yes4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? ye5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? Some what
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? Some what 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Dance8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Love9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Somewhat 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? The music yes. Different lyrics- yes