Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Keep Me Warm (ft. Jerry Peterson)
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: HiI love the music but I wanted a story line to follow your wonderful music. Take me some where with contrast between chorus and verse musically. You can do that with a lyrical hook or a melodic hook. Great start to a beautiful song. Keep writing. Happy writing Schantell–Redlady
Constructive Comments: HiI love the music but I wanted a story line to follow your wonderful music. Take me some where with contrast between chorus and verse. You can do that with a lyrical hook or a melodic hook. Great start to a beautiful song. Keep writing. Happy writing Schantell–Redlady