Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Rivers That Flow
Reviewer: Randall Mark
Positive Comments: Nice feel good, nostalgic kind of song. I especially liked the vocal harmonies in the chorus. Nice little rift at very end also. Well produced. Lyrics perfectly audible and good stuff from the instrumentation which did not drown out any lyrics. I like the overall feel and vibe of the song very much.
Constructive Comments: I thought maybe verses lyrics could have gone a little deeper, painted some specific pictures or scenes by being a bit more specific. Some of the rhymes felt a little forced, maybe you can explore “near rhymes”. I have found near rhymes open up many more choices and selections in words, not having to perfectly rhyme to be used. Good song though.