VORTEX (Electronic) by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: VORTEX (Electronic)Reviewer: DoolyPositive Comments: Finally! A song under 4mins. Bravo. Starts right away, flows nicely. Has distinct sections. Wonderfully structured. Great energy. Wonderful use of existing sections…

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: VORTEX (Electronic)

Reviewer: Dooly

Positive Comments: Finally! A song under 4mins. Bravo. Starts right away, flows nicely. Has distinct sections. Wonderfully structured. Great energy. Wonderful use of existing sections by removing some parts and bringing them back in. It flows so well! Good work!

Constructive Comments: Sounds…outdated. Not in a nostalgic way, like, you’re using older software of production methods. Be mindful of making music that inspired you, instead of making new things now. If I heard this was in 2005 it would make sense, that can be cool, but, you’ve slotted yourself in a niche market, and on a site such as this you need to appeal to as many as possible for placement opportunity. If this was Spotify I’d give a solid 4/5 for everything, but for BroadJam, I feel you need to do some thinking about what async licencing is vs simply making cool music.