Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)
Song: My Voice
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Here’s a really pretty “love lost” song. It’s a stream of consciousness…the guy is trying to figure out how/why he lost the girl and keeps asking questions, which really don’t have an answer. On the other hand, he could be asking, “Why did I lose my voice” (which doesn’t make sense, because he’s still singing.) Favorite lyric and rhyme: “… just what I did? But, that’s all history. It is just what it is.” Clever use of a common phrase in the song. The instrumentation is really smooth in this song. Nice job on the production. There are some beautiful harmonies in this song!
Constructive Comments: Vary the percussion/drum beat. It sounds so canned. Lyrics were … rather predictable. So if you wouldn’t mind letting me know, is the song about losing your voice or your girlfriend?