Broadjam Artist: SRJ
Song: Taken In
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This is a song of questions it’s a plea for the guy to notice the girl and begin a relationship. The vocal is convincing and passionate. Favorite rhyme: found/touch the ground. Also I found this lyric quite original and effective:Why don’t you takeA walk on the wild side?Why don’t you takeA look at my eyes?The instrumentation is fun, funky and interesting. I loved the way the intro started out simple and built.
Constructive Comments: Lots of repetition in this song. Maybe that’s common in this genre. I apologize I don’t know a lot about Electronic house. Ending is way to abrupt. Rhyme that I found trite: do/too in verse 1. You could easily shift things around to use the word move instead of too. It might work. “Too” is sometimes used “too” much. Intro lasted about 40 seconds. Might affect marketability.