Broadjam Artist: paul sandberg
Song: Track 13
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Love the intro! Wow on the horns! The first impression I got from this song was: Get up and dance. When I read the lyrics, I realize it’s more than that. The song is about the metro rail, but that’s a springboard for the metaphor of “where are we going?” The hook is extremely effective: Next Stop, Oblivion. The ending is stellar. Well thought out. You are quite the lyricist!
Constructive Comments: Not much to add here except for improve the vocal tone. But really it’s probably your style, so you can ignore that!