Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: This Old Cross (Pilgrim/Dunkle)
Reviewer: sef
Positive Comments: Very catchy! I like the music and the hook. Also it is biblically accurate. I like the claps during the chorus, you could even bring them up in volume a little bit more to solidify the beat. Great job!
Constructive Comments: I try to maintain honest feedback so that we can help each other get better. That being said, I think a quality demo singer could help to elevate this song even further. The vocal has a nice Bob Dylan quality to it, but I think that with this song a clean soaring vocal would put it over the top. Also I think slowing it down just a tiny bit and making it a gospel style praise song would also be a beautiful option, but I don’t think it’s necessary. Great job!