Broadjam Artist: CW Mullins
Song: Bunk Beds
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Here’s a song about summer camp experience and bunk beds. It’s told from a child’s point of view (only he’s now all grown up). It’s a pleasant tune that evokes memories from the past and is fun to listen to. You can almost hear the counselors yelling at the kids. Nice song!
Constructive Comments: This is an interesting topical song. I can’t help but wonder if it was written as an assignment in a songwriting class. OKAY pick a topic out of the hat and write a song about it. I think you did a very nice job! There were a couple of pitch issues I noticed (one vocal, one guitar). Interesting bridge. Not sure how it relates to the rest of the song.
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