Broadjam Artist: paul sandberg
Song: Track 13
Reviewer: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Positive Comments: I liked the train effect at the top. I can completely feel your passion for music and your dedication to the details of your music. I thought the hook was good, very memorable which if you can write like this, in my mind you have a gift. The change, probably the pre-chorus at 1:30 was beautiful. Blend of the mix is generally good aside from the low end is missing. Overall I like the song a lot, has a Ramones vibe to it, sass brass and class.
Constructive Comments: This mix makes it hard for me to hear your song. I am so distracted by the excited mid-range frequencies and lack of bottom end or bass that I can’t get past it. I am sorry. The guitar and vocals are kind of both heavy in the same frequency zone so there’s competition… I would add low end to the guitar. The main riff in the song reminds me of some classic rock song, I can’t put my finger on it… it’s hard to play that crunchy rhythm guitar and it not sounding like something before it.